Gosh, uh, this is some reaaalllly late criticism, considering here I am posting it 4 months later haha, but the first one looks really cool! It looks quite dynamic and I like it. The long hair looks cool, too. When it comes to guns, I'm no expert at all whatsoever, but I'd say to make it a little less blocky. Like, don't make everything circles, but maybe round out the edges, even if it's a rough sketch. Idk man, I can't draw guns haha.
Since I don't really know what your planning, I can't give much else info, but I hope that whatever you're doing is going well! And sorry for the late criticism, I found this just now and nobody had said anything, so I figured that it'd be better late than never
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Gosh, uh, this is some reaaalllly late criticism, considering here I am posting it 4 months later haha, but the first one looks really cool! It looks quite dynamic and I like it. The long hair looks cool, too. When it comes to guns, I'm no expert at all whatsoever, but I'd say to make it a little less blocky. Like, don't make everything circles, but maybe round out the edges, even if it's a rough sketch. Idk man, I can't draw guns haha.
Since I don't really know what your planning, I can't give much else info, but I hope that whatever you're doing is going well! And sorry for the late criticism, I found this just now and nobody had said anything, so I figured that it'd be better late than never